"Well, she's already shown she's willing to use a genuine tragedy as a means to an end. In all likelihood, this'll be a standard 'Boo hoo, woe is me, thank you so much for taking me in in my time of vulnerability, is there any way I can repay you' story. Oh please." Rae says, flipping through the first pages. "An arson plot might - just might - actually be enough to save it."

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